At first when he realizes they're locked out he's barefoot but when you pan out he has shoes on and then goes back to no shoes again. He then magically gains shoes after they got their coffee... the audio from the cars on the road also peaks at the end and is over powering. Good video though!
Liked the various kinds of shots and places. Maybe some music or some sort of audio could've helped. There are many scenes where you can see that Allen is wearing shoes when he isn't suppose to be wearing shoes.
I know he was supposed to be barefoot, but there were so many shots that he wasn't it kind of made it hilarious. I do wish you guys used a mic though, I really couldn't heard any of the dialog :(
The beginning where they realized they were locked out was really funny! The only inconsistency I noticed was when they returned from the gas station he had shoes on, other than that great job!
There was a lot of background noise and it was hard to hear sometimes. Also why did they not split up when checking the windows. Wasn't the other door locked originally. How did the screen door get locked. I felt some of the shots went on a bit long.
I think your concept was great, but the technical problems with the audio were distracting. I wish you would have used a mic. It was hard to hear a lot of the dialogue, which I think would have really made the video. There was also a lot of wind and road sound in the background, which made it hard to hear.
It was hard to hear the actors and the end climax was anticlimatic. I was expecting more emotion to being let into the house. Also, where did he get the shoes? Overall it was good and there was a lot of natural talking between actors.
I like the fact that you stuck with the idea of actually using your real roomie. I could tell you guys are really good friends! The idea you guys had def comes to life in the video; the only thing I wish was clearer was the audio (but our group had trouble with that too sooo we know its hard to fix) Good job!
I think the idea was good, and I liked how you actually went barefoot when it is truly freezing outside, but then the other shots that show the feet with shoes needed to be cropped out, or just filmed to where you wouldn't see shoes on. I think the characters acting was natural and not forced, so that was great. Overall, I like the concept, but some further editing could have improved it. Nice work!
At first when he realizes they're locked out he's barefoot but when you pan out he has shoes on and then goes back to no shoes again. He then magically gains shoes after they got their coffee... the audio from the cars on the road also peaks at the end and is over powering. Good video though!
ReplyDeleteLiked the various kinds of shots and places. Maybe some music or some sort of audio could've helped. There are many scenes where you can see that Allen is wearing shoes when he isn't suppose to be wearing shoes.
ReplyDeleteI know he was supposed to be barefoot, but there were so many shots that he wasn't it kind of made it hilarious.
ReplyDeleteI do wish you guys used a mic though, I really couldn't heard any of the dialog :(
The beginning where they realized they were locked out was really funny! The only inconsistency I noticed was when they returned from the gas station he had shoes on, other than that great job!
ReplyDeleteThere was a lot of background noise and it was hard to hear sometimes. Also why did they not split up when checking the windows. Wasn't the other door locked originally. How did the screen door get locked. I felt some of the shots went on a bit long.
ReplyDeleteI think your concept was great, but the technical problems with the audio were distracting. I wish you would have used a mic. It was hard to hear a lot of the dialogue, which I think would have really made the video. There was also a lot of wind and road sound in the background, which made it hard to hear.
ReplyDeleteIt was hard to hear the actors and the end climax was anticlimatic. I was expecting more emotion to being let into the house. Also, where did he get the shoes? Overall it was good and there was a lot of natural talking between actors.
ReplyDeleteI like the fact that you stuck with the idea of actually using your real roomie. I could tell you guys are really good friends! The idea you guys had def comes to life in the video; the only thing I wish was clearer was the audio (but our group had trouble with that too sooo we know its hard to fix) Good job!
ReplyDeleteI think the idea was good, and I liked how you actually went barefoot when it is truly freezing outside, but then the other shots that show the feet with shoes needed to be cropped out, or just filmed to where you wouldn't see shoes on. I think the characters acting was natural and not forced, so that was great. Overall, I like the concept, but some further editing could have improved it. Nice work!
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