I enjoy the time progression, it works very well to convey the idea. I wish that you could have changed the light to show different times of the day, that would have really sold the piece.
I liked how you showed just what it feels like to be frustrated on things like assignments, papers, etc. You did a good job with showing stages of frustration.
I like how you relayed the emotion because I feel like we all can feel that frustration at least at one point in our lives. I wish you would have done more movement or different things to help carry out the frustration but overall it was done well.
I just wish you had your own images used for the 6 hours later, to make it your own. A change of clothes would have been nice after the first day? To actually show that time has passed?
I like that you had fun with the idea of this project. Also that you used the Spongebob time lapse frames, it added an element of comedic relief to the emotion of frustration.
It was really funny, which I think you were going for. It also got across the point, which was to visually represent frustration. You did this with a very simple narrative, which is a little different than most of these videos.
I think your concept is really good for frustration, the way you executed it is extremely relatable. The hint of comedy with the intertitles was great too, because sometimes all you can do is laugh when things don't work out.
Good job! I think if you had more angles and more examples of being frustrated, like moving the body, it would have helped bring the frustration to life. It could have used more movement and angles. The music was good. It was nice to see some comic relief in there as well with the "3 days later..." images.
I think that you had a great concept! I think you conveyed the emotion well with what you had, but I just wish you would have used some different angles. I also think the edits were a bit too slow-paced for the music. Nice job overall!
I feel like it takes a while to actually catch the emotion and that you don't actually see "frustration" in the video. You really only see that you don't know what to do for your assignment. I just feel like you could've portrayed frustration in a better way.
I liked the music, I think it made a nice contrast between being productive and not being productive. It would have been fun to see more of the computer.
This video was funny. If that's what you were going for you did a pretty good job. A couple critiques I had would've been to maybe act a little more frustrated throughout , it's strong towards the beginning but towards the end the frustration looks like it dies down.
I love the idea and humor but I think you need some more angles.
ReplyDeleteI definitely enjoyed the comedic aspect of the video. I like that much better than frustration that displays anger.
ReplyDeleteI enjoy the time progression, it works very well to convey the idea. I wish that you could have changed the light to show different times of the day, that would have really sold the piece.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you showed just what it feels like to be frustrated on things like assignments, papers, etc. You did a good job with showing stages of frustration.
ReplyDeleteI like how you relayed the emotion because I feel like we all can feel that frustration at least at one point in our lives. I wish you would have done more movement or different things to help carry out the frustration but overall it was done well.
ReplyDeleteI get that you were frustrated but perhaps you should of moved stuff around in the video and changed clothes to hint at the passage of time
ReplyDeleteI just wish you had your own images used for the 6 hours later, to make it your own. A change of clothes would have been nice after the first day? To actually show that time has passed?
ReplyDeleteI like that you had fun with the idea of this project. Also that you used the Spongebob time lapse frames, it added an element of comedic relief to the emotion of frustration.
ReplyDeleteIt was really funny, which I think you were going for. It also got across the point, which was to visually represent frustration. You did this with a very simple narrative, which is a little different than most of these videos.
ReplyDeleteGreat job translating your emotion of the video. Maybe try to use a few more shots. the video also transitions well.
ReplyDeleteI think your concept is really good for frustration, the way you executed it is extremely relatable. The hint of comedy with the intertitles was great too, because sometimes all you can do is laugh when things don't work out.
ReplyDeleteGood job! I think if you had more angles and more examples of being frustrated, like moving the body, it would have helped bring the frustration to life. It could have used more movement and angles. The music was good. It was nice to see some comic relief in there as well with the "3 days later..." images.
ReplyDeleteI think that you had a great concept! I think you conveyed the emotion well with what you had, but I just wish you would have used some different angles. I also think the edits were a bit too slow-paced for the music. Nice job overall!
ReplyDeleteI feel like it takes a while to actually catch the emotion and that you don't actually see "frustration" in the video. You really only see that you don't know what to do for your assignment. I just feel like you could've portrayed frustration in a better way.
ReplyDeleteI liked the music, I think it made a nice contrast between being productive and not being productive. It would have been fun to see more of the computer.
ReplyDeleteThis video was funny. If that's what you were going for you did a pretty good job. A couple critiques I had would've been to maybe act a little more frustrated throughout , it's strong towards the beginning but towards the end the frustration looks like it dies down.
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